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Morningstar

Inläggav Morningstar » 15 aug 2010 23:24

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Inläggav Morningstar » 16 aug 2010 20:54

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Morningstar

Inläggav Morningstar » 17 aug 2010 01:59

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Inläggav Zokrates » 17 aug 2010 02:22

Dark and red shimmering lips,
exquisite freshness by a mix,
of sweet moistness in a love,
holy mackerel hey lay of Julia
so misogynous in the vertical
message of an fruity blessing,
with all tempted and joyfully
subliminal rare taste motions
on the most sensitive of pairs
dripping down saliva with some
reflecting bits of real souls
stuck between heaven and hell's
where it´s all going on and off

heavenly bodies intakes spaces
weightless time that filtrates
the rotating molding grittings
explorations of the why inside
exploding in small vibrations
dynamic pulses electrification
pulling, extracting poor cells
bounding in our bi o loyalties
falling in raw emphatic holes
dismantling the stoic armor
bringing it all up to surface
hard and tempted rusty minds,

surrounded by the steel force
captured in an black eternity
the kiss so echoed ended has
bedtime story only just begun
Romeo fuck you too brother,

Hallelujah!

It's a colorful word, the world,
and it's full of lies, that's true!


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jc-EdW1amwg


so I destroyed my sharp blade of glory
never more to be used as a sorry weapon
see there it's lying, the big little fake lie
on the ground, yes unbelted to the death
it ain't gonna spit out any fire, no more,
no more falling down in bad chair of love
no more stalking crowns in sad "I owe you"
no more I gonna split a poorly sick ghore,
or no money to be easily waggedly forsaken
or nor yet another honey to be golden mistaken
for a queen in despair of some others bad treat
I'm standing still,
rewarding stupidity
blessing my self in
truncated morality,
who the f**k cares?

Morningstar

Inläggav Morningstar » 17 aug 2010 18:30

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Inläggav Zokrates » 18 aug 2010 02:04

Hade jag varit jäkligt bra på engelska så hade jag förmodligen skrivit nevermore istället för never more...

Nej, det är alltid efteråt jag upptäcker alla de små felen, här är en kul länk för den som vill testa sina Engelska skills,
I Write Like!
http://iwl.me/


Testade nyss det jag postade senast och resultatet, http://iwl.me/s/d7939cdb

Vem fasiken är David Foster Wallace?

Biography

David Foster Wallace wrote the acclaimed novels Infinite Jest and The Broom of the System and the story collections Oblivion, Brief Interviews with Hideous Men, and Girl With Curious Hair. His nonfiction includes the essay collections Consider the Lobster and A Supposedly Fun Thing I'll Never Do Again, and the full-length work Everything and More.
He died in 2008.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Infinite_Jest , verkar läsvärd.

Obs!, Testet skall inte tas alltför seriöst,  utan mer ses som en kul grej.

Morningstar

Inläggav Morningstar » 18 aug 2010 16:31

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Inläggav Morningstar » 20 aug 2010 21:05

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Inläggav Morningstar » 30 aug 2010 11:10

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Inläggav Zokrates » 30 aug 2010 16:04

Luscious women and decadents, some faceless
craves some few more bucks for a better life
apart from boring yesterday, paid by the older
grumpy laborers sweat in the continuously
emptiness by making meaningless white pearls
or any other kind of consolidated faked toys,

life is only a filthy glass filled with joy with all
that and everything worth begging for that's
always ending up in the same kind of yields
on drugs, TV porn, sex and cheap alcohol.

Break a party at the guys faces with some
glossy lipstick, and you to got to play the
blue blue raw comedy set in a pink shade
that is just an underlying meta seeking of
the motherly love that  you never received,

and the party goes on and on and the circle
of life are re tied by a slippery hog knots
happy luck to you all bad sinners of mothers!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?hl=en&v=hdB0msrhLoc&gl=US

Morningstar

Inläggav Morningstar » 30 aug 2010 18:52

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Inläggav Morningstar » 30 aug 2010 18:54

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Inläggav Zokrates » 02 sep 2010 10:14

By and of the foolish minders
dully repeating your bygones
intendedly to be so forgotten
all that's was gone and hidden
as in the cleansed blessedness
now badly thrown it's shadows
surely they've awaken a beast
demons that your silence held
now running wild in daylight hell

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Inläggav Zokrates » 02 sep 2010 10:29

Trough your soul and empty cries
the blessed ones took advises
for sorrow roads awaiten misery
reversed reputation in an tragedy
curses always goes the ugly way
so does every people certainly
handle their duties just in astray

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Inläggav Zokrates » 02 sep 2010 10:36

Needing needle and red thread
my clappering clattering mouth
sewn holdup in forever silence
nevermore to let the tongue go
as freely like the birds wings
or as widely lips open do lift
a living prison inside outside


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